Saturday, June 9, 2012

Writing the Fight Scene Part 5 (Understanding the Trained Fighter Part 4)


The final type of fighter we will explore is the "gym fighter." By this term I am lumping in all the boxing gyms, the studios, the dojos, and any other type of fight training school that lasts for more than a few months of training. Generally speaking, no matter the style, the gym fighter is a man or a woman who may have started to train to fight for self-defense, to get off the street, or because of the exercise and eye-hand coordination. Whatever their reason, they trained and trained and may have even competed. They went past the level of training someone who would have taken the training for standard self-defense would have gone and have moved in to that insane level of perfecting their ability and knowledge. These people have chosen the narrow, rocky, and demanding road called "the warriors' path."

If you think I am trying to make these people (and myself) out to be something beyond normal, let me use a cliché: Someone enters a karate school to check it out. They ask the head instructor, "How long does it take a normal person to become a Black Belt." The instructor answers, "Normal people do not make it to Black Belt." The same adage could be said with boxers, fencers, and all other trained fighters who have spent years and continue to train every day. We are not super human or anything. What gives us our edge in a fight (especially, if we train in street fighting or other combat outside of the sport ring) are:
  1. Endurance Training--we are trained to make it through several rounds thinking, fighting, talking, and breathing. Each round can last roughly two minutes (depending on the style). Ask a normal person to do jumping jacks and hold a conversation for two minutes--watch the results.
  2. Strategy training--Because we constantly train and face a new fight every time (even if it is someone we faced before), we are forced to adapt and change our approach. We are forced to think moves ahead--like a chess master must think far ahead in the game to win.
  3. Hours of simulation-- In the military and within the police, they spend hours simulating and training for possible events. Fighter pilots spend time fighting in dogfights in simulators as well as flying. Cops spend time on shooting grounds that have "civilian and bad guy" targets to learn not to shoot the wrong one. Gym fighters have the ring. We will face more hand-to-hand combat situations in one hour of training than a normal untrained fighter will see in their lifetimes. Not only does this improve our endurance and strategy training, but it also improves our ability to read the opponent like a poker player watching for "the tell" in his opponent. It improves our dexterity and reaction time. Because we can read the other person, see their tell and predict what is about to happen, it makes us look faster than we really are. The reason is our time to react is extended because we know what you plan to do.

In my next set of blogs, I plan to explore the various kinds of training in more detail and then will eventually go into weapons use, disarmament, and the psyche behind the fighter.

Thank you for reading and please visit www.davidalanlucas.com and www.thewriterslens.com. Fiction is the world where the philosopher is the most free in our society to explore the human condition as he chooses.

Sunday, June 3, 2012

Having Coffee with Shawntelle Madison, Author of Coveted


This month, I am having coffee with Shawntelle Madison. Shawntelle is a debut novelist. I met her at Archon in St. Louis soon after she received word that her first book was going to be published.

Please grab a cup of coffee, or drink of your choice, and join me for a Coffee with David author interview.

David Alan Lucas: With so many books on vampires, what attracted you to choose to write an Urban Fantasy about a werewolf?
Shawntelle Madison:  Once I had the idea for Coveted, I actually made a personal decision to exclude vampires from the universe of my book. Not that I don’t like vampires, I just wanted my book to be different from the rest of the pack. Pun intended. ;)
Also, I just felt the book worked better with an OCD werewolf.

DAL: When you are starting to work on a new novel, what do you find brings the story into focus for you? A Character? A setting? Something else?
SM: For me all stories start with a character. The reader needs to be hopefully interested in their journey. Once in a while, an event is where I start, but character comes first the majority of the time.

DAL: How did you develop the voice used in Coveted?
SM:  Of all the books I’ve written, Nat’s voice is one I slipped into the easiest. Who hasn’t felt like the underdog? The one who is bullied and cast out? I just dug in deep and wrote how I felt. The book just flowed out from there.

DAL: What was the hardest part of writing Coveted?
SM:  The hardest part of writing the book was the feelings it brought up. Who doesn’t want to feel left out or abandoned? They are quite painful. In order to convey my heroine’s true feelings, I had to feel the same emotions—which meant a lot of crying while writing. ;)

DAL: What themes in your fiction writing seem to drive you the most?
SM:  For me, I love writing about characters who overcome adversity. I love when a character is beat down, but they are driven to stand up and do the right thing for the people they love.

DAL: Do you work on multiple novels at once? If so, how many?
SM:  I’ve tried working on multiple books at once, and I can, but I prefer to be deep in one person’s head. So I’d say I spend the majority of the time writing one book at a time.

DAL: What do you find focuses your writing?
SM: I get distracted very easily. I focus best when I’m at the library with some good music. If I write at home and I need to focus I use Write or Die. It has forced me to focus so many times.

DAL: How easy was it to take the leap of faith to become a serious writer and chase this career? What did you find that you had to do to take the step?
SM:  I actually found it quite easy to take that step. I knew I wanted to write books. I was hungry to write and that was all I needed to take the process seriously.

DAL: What was your biggest fear when you decided to be published?
SM:  My biggest fear is uncertainty. (This comes from someone who tries to keep track of everything and schedule stuff.) You just never know what will come at you and when it will come. I got no warning from my agent when he called to offer rep. And I was actually in the middle of a phone call with my crit partner when my agent called me with an offer from my publisher for Coveted.

DAL: Who was the most influential person or persons in your writing career?
SM:  I’d say the most influential persons would be my first critique partner, Sarah Bromley and one of my favorite science fiction authors , Octavia Butler. Sarah has been with me since the beginning and has really helped me learn the craft.

DAL: If there was some advice that you could give to a fellow writer, what would it be?
SM:  Never give up that hunger to write and to be published. Whenever I finished a book, I immediately started thinking about the next project. (I’m still that way.) It’s way too easy to give up these days. When people say it’s easier to edit a finished page instead of a blank one, they’re not kidding!

DAL: What advice would you give a fellow writer about pitching a story either face to face or in a query letter?
SM:  Starting working on your pitch as soon as possible before you actually need to give it. Try to whittle your pitch down to a few sentences or even one if possible.
When it comes to query letters I highly suggest you check literary agency websites for samples. There are many on the internet to give you great ideas. Also, don’t be afraid to ask crit partners or critique groups for feedback on your query. You’d be surprised what your own eyes miss.

DAL: When you plot your novels, from whose point of view do you plot from? The protagonist’s? The antagonist’s? The narrator’s? Someone else?
SM: Since I write first person I plot primarily from the protagonist.

DAL: What is your writing schedule like?
SM: You mean people have one? Just kidding. I’m one of those writers who doesn’t write every day—unless I am on deadline. I tend to write in bursts like a sprinter. I will go crazy and write thousands of words per day for weeks, then rest for a few weeks to months. Most books take me four to five months to write.

DAL: If you could have coffee (or drink of your choice) with four other authors from any time period, who would you choose and why?
SM: I’d have coffee with Octavia Butler, Clive Barker, Stephen King, and Dean Koontz. I have so many other authors, but I think I’d enjoy lunch with them first. :)

DAL: How could my readers learn more about you?
SM: If you’d like to connect with me, you can find me on Twitter as Shawntelle, on Facebook and through my website. I also do blog posts on Wicked Authors (Mondays) and Magic & Mayhem Writers (Wednesdays).

To win a free copy of Coveted, please see: First of the Month Book Giveaway: Coveted  http://davidalanlucas.blogspot.com/2012/06/first-of-month-book-giveaway-coveted.html

Thank you for reading and please visit www.davidalanlucas.com and www.thewriterslens.com. You can also follow me on twitter @Owlkenpowriter and the Writer’s Lens @TheWritersLens. Fiction is the world where the philosopher is the most free in our society to explore the human condition as he chooses.

First of the Month Book Giveaway: Coveted

This month, it is my pleasure to bring you another debut author, Shawntelle Madison by giving away her novel Coveted. 

From Barnes and Noble: " “A smart, sexy, rip-roaring good time.”—New York Times bestselling author Angie Fox

“I’m obsessed with Shawntelle Madison’s fantastic urban fantasy debut, featuring hoarding werewolves, magic, and mayhem! More, please!”—Michelle Rowen, bestselling author of That Old Black Magic

 
SOMETIMES WHAT YOU COVET IS IMPOSSIBLE TO KEEP.


For werewolf Natalya Stravinsky, the supernatural is nothing extraordinary. What does seem strange is that she’s stuck in her hometown of South Toms River, New Jersey, the outcast of her pack, selling antiques to finicky magical creatures. Restless and recovering from her split with gorgeous ex-boyfriend, Thorn, Nat finds comfort in an unusual place: her obsessively collected stash of holiday trinkets. But complications pile up faster than her ornaments when Thorn returns home—and the two discover that the spark between them remains intense.


Before Nat can sort out their relationship, she must face a more immediate and dangerous problem. Her pack is under attack from the savage Long Island werewolves—and Nat is their first target in a turf war. Toss in a handsome wizard vying for her affection, a therapy group for the anxious and enchanted, and the South Toms River pack leader ready to throw her to the wolves, and it’s enough to give anybody a panic attack. With the stakes as high as the full moon, Nat must summon all of her strength to save her pack and, ultimately, herself.

“If you like your urban fantasy original, quirky, and offbeat, this is the series for you. Natalya is the craziest heroine since Carolyn Crane’s Justine Jones, and you will love her just as much.”—Ann Aguirre, bestselling author of Devil’s Punch"

How do you win a free copy of this book?  To enter the contest, simply leave a comment or question on the Coffee with David blog between now (June 3, 2012) and midnight June 30 2012. Please include your email so we can reach you if you win. The more comments you leave, the greater your chance of winning the contest. If you refer others to Coffee with David who mention your name in their comments, I'll enter your name again in our random number generator along with theirs, also increasing your chances at winning! The winner will be chosen after midnight on Saturday, June 30th and the announcement made on Sunday, July 1. Good luck and comment often.

Thank you for reading and please visit www.davidalanlucas.com and www.thewriterslens.com. You can also follow me on twitter @Owlkenpowriter and the Writer’s Lens @TheWritersLens. Fiction is the world where the philosopher is the most free in our society to explore the human condition as he chooses.

The winner of Katana is . . .

My apologies for the late announcement.

The winner of Katana by Cole Gibson is: Reading Mind. Congrats!  Please email me at David@DavidAlanLucas with your shipping address and I will get this book out to you by FedEx.

Thank you everyone for your comments!


Thank you for reading and please visit www.davidalanlucas.com and www.thewriterslens.com. You can also follow me on twitter @Owlkenpowriter and the Writer’s Lens @TheWritersLens. Fiction is the world where the philosopher is the most free in our society to explore the human condition as he chooses.